This is a blogspot created to place my artworks from my drawing courses. Posted on the spot are artworks from my Drawing II and my current AP drawing class (Junior and Senior year). Feel free to critique constructively or comment on what you see. Enjoy!
I really enjoy this piece, I don't know if it's partially because I know the amount of work that went in though. The circle of color with the rose in the middle is definitely the focal point in my opinion. The design on the fabric works really well and a viewer can really see the texture and wrinkles of the cloth. Nothing I can really see to change.
I think that this is one of your strongest pieces. You have created focal points by using color in some areas. This also creates contrast. There are no improvements I can think of and I believe it is ready for submission.
I love the color scheme in this one. it really says "south of the border" to me. and although in the big picture the color is the smallest part that is where my eye is drawn, and the sections are so well spaced apart that i follow them around the whole piece...great placement and the fact that you used essentially the same colors it added some rhythm to the piece as well.
I really like the localized bursts of color. Although it is a successful piece in black-and-white, the color adds an element of emphasis that make it even better. This is my favorite piece.
I love this piece. The shading is really nice. I think the cirlces could have been a little bigger but I really like where you placed them. The rose in particular stands out to me. You did a great job on this.
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I really enjoy this piece, I don't know if it's partially because I know the amount of work that went in though. The circle of color with the rose in the middle is definitely the focal point in my opinion. The design on the fabric works really well and a viewer can really see the texture and wrinkles of the cloth. Nothing I can really see to change.
I think that this is one of your strongest pieces. You have created focal points by using color in some areas. This also creates contrast. There are no improvements I can think of and I believe it is ready for submission.
I love the color scheme in this one. it really says "south of the border" to me. and although in the big picture the color is the smallest part that is where my eye is drawn, and the sections are so well spaced apart that i follow them around the whole piece...great placement and the fact that you used essentially the same colors it added some rhythm to the piece as well.
I really like the localized bursts of color. Although it is a successful piece in black-and-white, the color adds an element of emphasis that make it even better. This is my favorite piece.
I love this piece. The shading is really nice. I think the cirlces could have been a little bigger but I really like where you placed them. The rose in particular stands out to me. You did a great job on this.
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